Assignment Response Checklist (ARC)
- Guide for Users
- Staff Version

Centre for the Advancement of Learning and Teaching (CALT) - Monash University

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  1. Introduction

  2. Using the Assignment Response Checklist

  3. Assignment Response Checklist

  4. Sample Application

  5. Enquiries

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Introduction

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Purpose

The Assignment Response Checklist is a set of standard annotations that can be used by staff in the marking of student assignments. The Checklist is designed to give quick and comprehensive feedback on a range of writing problems common in student work - grammar, paragraph structure, citations etc. The purpose of the Checklist is to improve the quality of feedback provided to students and to help students identify those structural aspects of their writing that need improvement.

The Checklist was originally developed in conjunction with the Monash University Language Policy (1996) which recommended the development of a set of correction symbols for use across the university, both as an 'efficient' form of feedback to students on their writing and as a way of 'reinforcing the learning process across different subjects'. It is now presented as a staff resource as a further response to the Victorian Auditor-General's report on International Students, 2002. The report highlights the need for academic staff to provide guidance to students on their writing.

Design and trialing of the Checklist

The format of the Assignment Response Checklist is similar to that used by scholarly journals in the correcting of proofs (e.g. APA Manual). For its specific focus on student writing problems, the Checklist draws on theoretical developments in the field of error analysis (e.g. Corder, 1981; Taylor and Nightingale, 1990). It also draws on the experience of staff in the Language and Learning Services Unit (LLS) in their work with students.

The Checklist is organised around a list of problem-types, shown in Table 1. This list is an extensive (but not exhaustive) one, the aim being to develop a finite set of categories that could be readily applied by teaching staff across the university.

Text Level Problem-Type Marginal Mark
WordPunctuationp
Spellingsp
Word formwf
Word/phrase choicewc
Tense choicetc
Omitted word(s)^
SentenceSentence structuress
Run-on sentencesr
Expressionexp
ParagraphParagraph structureps
Incomplete paragraphpi
Run-on paragraphpr
TextualCitationcit
Attributionatt
Evidenceev
Connectioncon
Meaning?

Table 1: Problem types used in the Assignment Response Checklist

In the development process, the main criteria used to select categories were that they be problem types: i) frequently observed in student writing and ii) amenable to succinct explanation to students. There was also an effort to include categories that could be applied to the writing of students both from English speaking and non-English speaking backgrounds (ESB and NESB).

In the list above, problem types are organised hierarchically ranging from problems at the word level to those at a broader textual level. Each category in the list is explained and exemplified in the Assignment Response Checklist.

The Checklist was trialed with staff from a range of departments - biology, linguistics, management (undergraduate) and engineering (postgraduate) - in the marking of approximately 200 student assignments. Overall, responses from participating staff were very favorable. Results from the trial were used subsequently to make minor revisions.

It is important to note that the Checklist is designed to give feedback on language and style matters in student work, but not on issues of academic content. Content issues are best handled in the conventional way i.e. as written comments in margins and/or at the end of a piece of work. For other language problems not covered in the Checklist (e.g. redundancy), staff would need to use their own annotations or comments.

Using the Checklist in Departments

To assist staff in adopting the Checklist, LLS staff are available to conduct in-service sessions by arrangement with departments. Information on how to use the Checklist is presented in the next section - Using the Assignment Response Checklist.

References

Corder, S.P. (1981). Error Analysis and Interlanguage. Oxford: Oxford University Press.
Monash Language Policy Committee (1996). Report of Working Party on Implementation of Language Policy.
Taylor, G. and P. Nightingale (1990). Not mechanics but meaning: Error in tertiary students writing. Higher Education Research and Development, 9:2. pp. 161-75.

Acknowledgement

The unit wishes to acknowledge the expert guidance and advice received from Professor Michael Clyne and Dr. Mark Newbrook.


Using the Assignment Response Checklist

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This section outlines a suggested standard procedure for staff using the Checklist and also a number of possible variations aimed at optimising its value as a teaching tool.

Suggested Procedure

  1. Before using the Checklist with student work, staff should spend about 10 minutes familiarising themselves with the Checklist's categories of problem types and their corresponding annotations.

  2. When marking students' work, refer to the Assignment Response Checklist - Staff Version, marking work with annotations where appropriate.

  3. Return work to students with an accompanying copy of the Assignment Response Checklist - Student Version. (As an alternative, the Student Version can be included in the subject outline distributed at the commencement of a course, to be used for ready reference during semester.)

  4. Ask students to check thoroughly their returned assignment, note problems identified and make necessary changes.

Variations

  1. Longer assignments
    For longer assignments, it may not be practicable to use the Checklist on the entire assignment. In this case, use it on only a section of the assignment (e.g. the first few pages). Ask students to check whether the problem types you have identified in this section are present in the remainder of the work.

  2. Seriously flawed writing
    For seriously flawed writing, it may not be practicable to use the Checklist on the entire assignment, nor to attend to all problems identified in the piece. Use the Checklist on only a section of the assignment, or attend only to selected problem types (for example sentence structure and citations), indicating to students that this is what you have done.

  3. Redrafting
    The Checklist can be used for feedback on drafts of work, including drafts of postgraduate work. Follow the suggested procedure above. Ask students to resubmit their work, using the Checklist to work out the revisions they need to make.

  4. Peer editing of work
    The Checklist can be used by students as well as staff to give feedback on work. Distribute to students copies of the Assignment Response Checklist - Staff Version. Ask them to work in pairs and to provide feedback on each other's work before they submit it to you.

  5. Using the Checklist to clarify expectations
    You can explain the Checklist in a lecture or tutorial early in the semester, clarifying any particular expectations of writing matters in your subject. You may wish to discuss the main types of problems you have previously observed in student writing, and to provide subject-related style guides and other information, where appropriate.

  6. Customising the Checklist
    Departments may wish to adapt the Checklist to suit their specific requirements. The problem types included are of a general nature, designed for use in any subject area. You may find a need for additional categories that apply to your particular subject (e.g. poor integration of graphical material in a technical subject). Similarly, you may find that some categories in the present version are less relevant to your students and could be omitted. This process of 'customising' the Checklist can also be conducted in consultation with Language and Learning Services staff.


Assignment Response Checklist

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Text Level: Word

Problem-Type:Punctuation
Question Probe:How can this be punctuated more appropriately?
Textual Mark:Indicate place in text
Marginal Mark:p
Example:

First, the problem needs to be
p
determined in it's entirety.

Problem-Type:Spelling
Question Probe:What is the correct spelling of this word?
Textual Mark:Indicate word
Marginal Mark:sp
Example:

Several changes have been
sp
made in the third addition of

the book.

Problem-Type:Word form
Question Probe:What is the correct form of this word?
Textual Mark:Indicate word
Marginal Mark:wf
Example:

A satisfactory rate of economic
wf
growth will varying from time

to time.

Problem-Type:Word/phrase choice
Question Probe:What is a more appropriate word or phrase?
Textual Mark:Indicate word
Marginal Mark:wc
Example:
wc
A range of stuff was tested in

the experiment.

Problem-Type:Tense choice
Question Probe:What is a more appropriate tense?
Textual Mark:Indicate word
Marginal Mark:tc
Example:

As Table 3 shows, performance
tc
falls in 1985.

Problem-Type:Omitted word(s)
Question Probe:What word(s) is missing here?
Textual Mark:Indicate place in text
Marginal Mark:^
Example:

A growth in the money supply

is a factor ^ can cause pressure

on prices.

Text Level: Sentence

Problem-Type:Sentence structure
Question Probe:How can this sentence be made more grammatical?
Textual Mark:Mark off sentence
Marginal Mark:ss
Example:

Public policy formulation

should involve community
ss
groups. In particular, those
identified as minority groups.

Problem-Type:Run-on sentence
Question Probe:How can this sentence be broken into two or more sentences?
Textual Mark:Mark off sentence
Marginal Mark:sr
Example:
sr
This essay deals with the issue
of unemployment, in the first
part the underlying causes of
inflation will be discussed.

Problem-Type:Expression
Question Probe:How can this be better expressed?
Textual Mark:Mark off sentence(s)
Marginal Mark:exp

Text Level: Paragraph

Problem-Type:Paragraph structure
Question Probe:How can this paragraph be better organised?
Textual Mark:Mark off paragraph
Marginal Mark:ps

Problem-Type:Incomplete paragraph
Question Probe:How can the ideas in this paragraph be better organised?
Textual Mark:Mark off paragraph
Marginal Mark:pi

Problem-Type:Run-on paragraph
Question Probe:How can this paragraph be broken into two or more shorter paragraphs?
Textual Mark:Mark off paragraph
Marginal Mark:pr

Text Level: Textual

Problem-Type:Citation
Question Probe:What is the correct way to set out this citation?
Textual Mark:Indicate place in text
Marginal Mark:cit
Example:
cit
In a study conducted by Jones, it

was found that 'perceptions of

acceptable usage vary considerably

among individuals'.

Problem-Type:Attribution
Question Probe:Are these your ideas or those of another writer? (You may need to provide a citation.)
Textual Mark:Mark off section of text
Marginal Mark:att
Example:

Keynes (1936) believed that

governments have a major role to

play in the economy. But the
att
problem is that government
involvement tends to 'crowd out' the
private sector.

Problem-Type:Evidence
Question Probe:What evidence can you provide for this assertion?
Textual Mark:Mark off section of text
Marginal Mark:ev
Example:
ev
Australia is one of the most
advanced countries in the provision
of health care. For this reason,

many countries seek to emulate

Australian health care practices.

Problem-Type:Connection
Question Probe:What is the connection between these ideas?
Textual Mark:Mark off section of text
Marginal Mark:con
Example:
con
Governments continue to place the
greatest emphasis on keeping
inflation low. Unemployment
continues to be a problem.

Problem-Type:Meaning
Question Probe:What do you mean here?
Textual Mark:Mark off section of text
Marginal Mark:?
Example:
?
The state is seen as a corporate
rationaliser concerned about their
own career advancement.


Sample Application

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Biology Essay



Despite many efforts to eradicate malaria, it is still common today. Discuss the

biology of malarial resistance and new prospects for its control.



Presently malaria is regarded as one of the most serious health threats in the world
cit
(Smith). It is most prominent in the tropics including countries such as New Guinea,

Indonesia and numerous African countries, and is considered to be a parasite. Ass

parasite being an organism which lives on or within another organism. The parasite

uses this organism (the host) to sustain its life and, in the case of malaria, often kills the

host. Malarial parasites are of the genus Plasmodium and spent part of their life cycletc

in humans and the rest in Anopheles mosquitos called vectors. Sporozoites are found in
sr
the salivary glands of these vectors and when an infected feeding female Anopheles
pierces the human skin with her proboscis and injects her saliva into the wound, the
numerous parasite cells are released in to the blood stream and work their way to thesp
liver and lymphatic system where they then multiply and spread rapidly to all parts of
the body.



People can be infected with malaria once, twice or a number of times. It is notatt

correct to say that because a person has been infected once, that they are totally

immune. However, it is the case that people who have been infected a number of times

do acquire some immunity. This simply means that without drugs, the number of
sr
parasites in the blood decreases, and there are no visible signs or symptoms, this
person is not at any great risk of death and is considered a 'carrier', which means that
they can pass on this infection to others because when a mosquito bites them, it picks
up the parasite and infects other individuals.

Enquiries

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For further information about the Assignment Response Checklist contact:

Mr. Tim Moore
CALT
Ext. 55069
Tim.Moore@calt.monash.edu.au
Dr. Rosemary Clerehan
CALT
Ext. 53053
Rosemary.Clerehan@calt.monash.edu.au

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