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Response Checklist (ARC)
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Purpose
The Assignment Response Checklist is a set of standard annotations that can be
used by staff in the marking of student assignments. The Checklist is designed
to give quick and comprehensive feedback on a range of writing problems common
in student work - grammar, paragraph structure, citations etc. The purpose of
the Checklist is to improve the quality of feedback provided to students and to
help students identify those structural aspects of their writing that need
improvement.
The Checklist was originally developed in conjunction with the Monash University
Language Policy (1996) which recommended the development of a set of correction
symbols for use across the university, both as an 'efficient' form of feedback
to students on their writing and as a way of 'reinforcing the learning process
across different subjects'. It is now presented as a staff resource as a
further response to the Victorian Auditor-General's report on International
Students, 2002. The report highlights the need for academic staff to provide
guidance to students on their writing.
Design and trialing of the Checklist
The format of the Assignment Response Checklist is similar to that used by
scholarly journals in the correcting of proofs (e.g. APA Manual). For its
specific focus on student writing problems, the Checklist draws on theoretical
developments in the field of error analysis (e.g. Corder, 1981; Taylor and
Nightingale, 1990). It also draws on the experience of staff in the Language
and Learning Services Unit (LLS) in their work with students.
The Checklist is organised around a list of problem-types, shown in Table 1.
This list is an extensive (but not exhaustive) one, the aim being to develop a
finite set of categories that could be readily applied by teaching staff across
the university.
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Text Level |
Problem-Type |
Marginal Mark |
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| Word | Punctuation | p |
| Spelling | sp |
| Word form | wf |
| Word/phrase choice | wc |
| Tense choice | tc |
| Omitted word(s) | ^ |
| Sentence | Sentence structure | ss |
| Run-on sentence | sr |
| Expression | exp |
| Paragraph | Paragraph structure | ps |
| Incomplete paragraph | pi |
| Run-on paragraph | pr |
| Textual | Citation | cit |
| Attribution | att |
| Evidence | ev |
| Connection | con |
| Meaning | ? |
Table 1: Problem types used in the Assignment Response Checklist
In the development process, the main criteria used to select categories were
that they be problem types: i) frequently observed in student writing and ii)
amenable to succinct explanation to students. There was also an effort to
include categories that could be applied to the writing of students both from
English speaking and non-English speaking backgrounds (ESB and NESB).
In the list above, problem types are organised hierarchically ranging from
problems at the word level to those at a broader textual level. Each category
in the list is explained and exemplified in the Assignment Response Checklist.
The Checklist was trialed with staff from a range of departments - biology,
linguistics, management (undergraduate) and engineering (postgraduate) - in the
marking of approximately 200 student assignments. Overall, responses from
participating staff were very favorable. Results from the trial were used
subsequently to make minor revisions.
It is important to note that the Checklist is designed to give feedback on
language and style matters in student work, but not on issues of academic
content. Content issues are best handled in the conventional way i.e. as
written comments in margins and/or at the end of a piece of work. For other
language problems not covered in the Checklist (e.g. redundancy), staff would
need to use their own annotations or comments.
Using the Checklist in Departments
To assist staff in adopting the Checklist, LLS staff are available to conduct
in-service sessions by arrangement with departments. Information on how to use
the Checklist is presented in the next section - Using the Assignment Response
Checklist.
References
Corder, S.P. (1981). Error Analysis and Interlanguage. Oxford: Oxford
University Press.
Monash Language Policy Committee (1996). Report of Working Party on
Implementation of Language Policy.
Taylor, G. and P. Nightingale (1990). Not mechanics but meaning: Error in
tertiary students writing. Higher Education Research and Development,
9:2. pp. 161-75.
Acknowledgement
The unit wishes to acknowledge the expert guidance and advice received from
Professor Michael Clyne and Dr. Mark Newbrook.
This section outlines a suggested standard procedure for staff using the
Checklist and also a number of possible variations aimed at optimising its
value as a teaching tool.
Suggested Procedure
Before using the Checklist with student work, staff should spend about 10
minutes familiarising themselves with the Checklist's categories of problem
types and their corresponding annotations.
When marking students' work, refer to the Assignment Response Checklist - Staff
Version, marking work with annotations where appropriate.
Return work to students with an accompanying copy of the Assignment Response
Checklist - Student Version. (As an alternative, the Student Version can be
included in the subject outline distributed at the commencement of a course, to
be used for ready reference during semester.)
Ask students to check thoroughly their returned assignment, note problems
identified and make necessary changes.
Variations
Longer assignments
For longer assignments, it may not be practicable to use the Checklist on the
entire assignment. In this case, use it on only a section of the assignment
(e.g. the first few pages). Ask students to check whether the problem types you
have identified in this section are present in the remainder of the work.
Seriously flawed writing
For seriously flawed writing, it may not be practicable to use the Checklist on
the entire assignment, nor to attend to all problems identified in the piece.
Use the Checklist on only a section of the assignment, or attend only to
selected problem types (for example sentence structure and citations),
indicating to students that this is what you have done.
Redrafting
The Checklist can be used for feedback on drafts of work, including drafts of
postgraduate work. Follow the suggested procedure above. Ask students to
resubmit their work, using the Checklist to work out the revisions they need to
make.
Peer editing of work
The Checklist can be used by students as well as staff to give feedback on
work. Distribute to students copies of the Assignment Response Checklist -
Staff Version. Ask them to work in pairs and to provide feedback on each
other's work before they submit it to you.
Using the Checklist to clarify expectations
You can explain the Checklist in a lecture or tutorial early in the semester,
clarifying any particular expectations of writing matters in your subject. You
may wish to discuss the main types of problems you have previously observed in
student writing, and to provide subject-related style guides and other
information, where appropriate.
Customising the Checklist
Departments may wish to adapt the Checklist to suit their specific
requirements. The problem types included are of a general nature, designed for use in any subject
area. You may find a need for additional categories that apply to your
particular subject (e.g. poor integration of graphical material in a technical
subject). Similarly, you may find that some categories in the present version
are less relevant to your students and could be omitted. This process of
'customising' the Checklist can also be conducted in consultation with Language
and Learning Services staff.
Text Level: Word
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Problem-Type: | Punctuation |
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Question Probe: | How can this be punctuated more appropriately? |
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Textual Mark: | Indicate place in text |
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Marginal Mark: | p |
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Example: |
| First, the problem needs to be |
| p
| determined in it's entirety. |
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Problem-Type: | Spelling |
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Question Probe: | What is the correct spelling of this word? |
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Textual Mark: | Indicate word |
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Marginal Mark: | sp |
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Example: |
| Several changes have been |
| sp
| made in the third addition of |
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| the book. |
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Problem-Type: | Word form |
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Question Probe: | What is the correct form of this word? |
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Textual Mark: | Indicate word |
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Marginal Mark: | wf |
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Example: |
| A satisfactory rate of economic |
| wf
| growth will varying from time |
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| to time. |
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Problem-Type: | Word/phrase choice |
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Question Probe: | What is a more appropriate word or phrase? |
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Textual Mark: | Indicate word |
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Marginal Mark: | wc |
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Example: | wc
| A range of stuff was tested in |
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| the experiment. |
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Problem-Type: | Tense choice |
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Question Probe: | What is a more appropriate tense? |
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Textual Mark: | Indicate word |
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Marginal Mark: | tc |
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Example: |
| As Table 3 shows, performance |
| tc
| falls in 1985. |
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Problem-Type: | Omitted word(s) |
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Question Probe: | What word(s) is missing here? |
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Textual Mark: | Indicate place in text |
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Marginal Mark: | ^ |
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Example: |
| A growth in the money supply |
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| is a factor ^ can cause pressure |
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| on prices. |
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Text Level: Sentence
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Problem-Type: | Sentence structure |
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Question Probe: | How can this sentence be made more grammatical? |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off sentence |
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Marginal Mark: | ss |
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Example: |
| Public policy formulation |
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| should involve community |
| ss
| groups. In particular, those |
| | identified as minority groups. |
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Problem-Type: | Run-on sentence |
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Question Probe: | How can this sentence be broken into two or more sentences? |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off sentence |
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Marginal Mark: | sr |
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Example: | sr
| This essay deals with the issue |
| | of unemployment, in the first |
| | part the underlying causes of |
| | inflation will be discussed. |
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Problem-Type: | Expression |
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Question Probe: | How can this be better expressed? |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off sentence(s) |
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Marginal Mark: | exp |
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Text Level: Paragraph
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Problem-Type: | Paragraph structure |
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Question Probe: | How can this paragraph be better organised? |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off paragraph |
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Marginal Mark: | ps |
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Problem-Type: | Incomplete paragraph |
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Question Probe: | How can the ideas in this paragraph be better organised? |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off paragraph |
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Marginal Mark: | pi |
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Problem-Type: | Run-on paragraph |
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Question Probe: | How can this paragraph be broken into two or more shorter paragraphs? |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off paragraph |
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Marginal Mark: | pr |
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Text Level: Textual
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Problem-Type: | Citation |
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Question Probe: | What is the correct way to set out this citation? |
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Textual Mark: | Indicate place in text |
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Marginal Mark: | cit |
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Example: | cit
| In a study conducted by Jones, it |
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| was found that 'perceptions of |
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| acceptable usage vary considerably |
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| among individuals'. |
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Problem-Type: | Attribution |
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Question Probe: | Are these your ideas or those of another writer? (You may need to provide a citation.) |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off section of text |
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Marginal Mark: | att |
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Example: |
| Keynes (1936) believed that |
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| governments have a major role to |
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| play in the economy. But the |
| att
| problem is that government |
| | involvement tends to 'crowd out' the |
| | private sector. |
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Problem-Type: | Evidence |
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Question Probe: | What evidence can you provide for this assertion? |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off section of text |
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Marginal Mark: | ev |
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Example: | ev
| Australia is one of the most |
| | advanced countries in the provision |
| | of health care. For this reason, |
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| many countries seek to emulate |
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| Australian health care practices. |
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Problem-Type: | Connection |
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Question Probe: | What is the connection between these ideas? |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off section of text |
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Marginal Mark: | con |
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Example: | con
| Governments continue to place the |
| | greatest emphasis on keeping |
| | inflation low. Unemployment |
| | continues to be a problem. |
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Problem-Type: | Meaning |
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Question Probe: | What do you mean here? |
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Textual Mark: | Mark off section of text |
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Marginal Mark: | ? |
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Example: | ?
| The state is seen as a corporate |
| | rationaliser concerned about their |
| | own career advancement. |
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| Biology Essay |
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| Despite many efforts to eradicate malaria, it is still common today. Discuss the |
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| biology of malarial resistance and new prospects for its control. |
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| Presently malaria is regarded as one of the most serious health threats in the world |
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cit
| (Smith). It is most prominent in the tropics including countries such as New Guinea, |
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| Indonesia and numerous African countries, and is considered to be a parasite. A | ss
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| parasite being an organism which lives on or within another organism. The parasite |
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| uses this organism (the host) to sustain its life and, in the case of malaria, often kills the |
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| host. Malarial parasites are of the genus Plasmodium and spent part of their life cycle | tc
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| in humans and the rest in Anopheles mosquitos called vectors. Sporozoites are found in |
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| the salivary glands of these vectors and when an infected feeding female Anopheles |
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| pierces the human skin with her proboscis and injects her saliva into the wound, the |
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| numerous parasite cells are released in to the blood stream and work their way to the | sp
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| liver and lymphatic system where they then multiply and spread rapidly to all parts of |
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| the body. |
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| People can be infected with malaria once, twice or a number of times. It is not | att
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| correct to say that because a person has been infected once, that they are totally |
| immune. However, it is the case that people who have been infected a number of times |
| do acquire some immunity. This simply means that without drugs, the number of |
sr
| parasites in the blood decreases, and there are no visible signs or symptoms, this |
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| person is not at any great risk of death and is considered a 'carrier', which means that |
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| they can pass on this infection to others because when a mosquito bites them, it picks |
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| up the parasite and infects other individuals. |
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